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作为智慧留学的文书老师,我经手的学生文书案例当中,有一位非常有理想的阳光大男孩让我留下了很深的印象。他就是今天美国留学文书案例的主角——Z同学。Z同学是一个非常富有爱心的学生,对心理学、教育学有深刻的研究与理解。


埋下理想的种子

Z同学就读于京城某知名公立高中国际部。高中期间在身为教师的奶奶的鼓舞下,帮助几个贫困家庭的学生义务补课,取得了对教育学更进一步的理解与使命感。申请美本教育学虽然不是很热门专业,但是排名靠前的学校竞争也是十分激烈的。必须在一个有丰富经验的留学咨询机构进行精心策划与定位,才能申请到理想的学校。


对教育情有独钟

Z同学之所以会选择转教育学,是因为这与他的个人特质以及所经历过的事情有关系的。在经历各类考试时,当他被所有试卷、各方的压力压的透不过气来时,以及他的学生也在经历类似历程,引发他去思考,传统应试教育是否能有效培养学生的创造力,开启他们的思维,智力创造,从而为未来社会储备更多人才?Z同学追求的人生其实是能够吸收很多知识的一个过程,能够学习自己想学的东西,然后慢慢塑造自己对这个世界的看法。Z同学希望的人生是一个探索与尝试的过程,不希望以后会失去主动去改变的勇气,那么去美国学习教育学就是十分重要的一个途径,学习如何利用新的教育科技、理念、手段让更多孩子们获益。


怀着一颗有理想的心创作留学文书

通过不断的面谈,网络与电话沟通,Z同学与家长就感受到了智慧留学文书与申请老师的敬业与专业精神。后来在几次视频会议上,Z同学对于教育学的热忱,追求与长久的职业目标给我们留下了深刻的印象。在申请季来临之际,文书写作老师,海外顾问与Z同学反复进行沟通,对定校后个人陈述,ESSAY的布局,选材进行了反复的斟酌,成稿后让海外招生官进行了细致的润色与加工,最终文书语言风格打磨到了符合美国知名大学招生官的青睐。最终Z同学获得了美国中部知名公立大学的录取。


下面是文书节选供大家参考

My grandmother, a high school English teacher, enlightened my interest in mission of education and encouraged me to investigate further into latest educational methods, technology and theories. During my high school study, I spend 4 hours per week to voluntarily teach English and Math to two kids in primary schools from underprivileged families. This has greatly inspired my further motivation to pursue study in education. When browsing the information of the Elementary Education Program on your website, I am fascinated with the course setting, which provides students opportunities to engage in substantial supervised fieldwork especially in diverse schools. Moreover, the comprehensive course layout of University of XXX could also endow me with profound insight into how to utilize high technology, psychology, sociology and economics to better serve educational purposes. Also, students in University of XXX have the opportunity to attend the community field experiences, self-examination of teaching practice, and multicultural classroom activities. I believe my current experience in volunteering teaching in China and future experiences in your university will enable me to be fully prepared for my future career in education.


My long-term goal is to establish a non-profit community organization to provide more accessible educational resources to students with underprivileged families within and without China. University of XXX has a deep-rooted convention to instill students with passion and momentum to serve our community. I understand that in order to better serve our community with educational resource, I need to possess expertise and leadership capabilities to make my organization viable and operational. University of XXX will inspire me with the necessary capability to operate this organization through ingenious financial, technological and administrative maneuvers to survive and thrive. And the extensive alumni connection of University of XXX will nurture my dream-chasing mission to come true.


智慧留学专注美国高端留学。智慧留学的老师一直都是秉承着“小而精”、“小而美”的理念,将每一位学生的材料进行个性化打造,力求将每一位怀揣名校梦想的学生都送往美国top30名校象牙塔。智慧留学的文书是一大亮点,个性化匹配的海外顾问以及不限次数修改的理念更是非常适合高要求的学生和家长。众多智慧留学学员家长评价,智慧留学的老师专业性强,很有责任心,选择智慧留学申请美国留学,家长省心,学生开心!

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